In this picture Angelina Jolie is pregnant by Brad Pitt. Their children will be twins. Angelina Jolie is wearing a black dress, she is fantastic. To improve her style she could wear a diamond necklace, a bracelet, a diamond ring and a fashion shoulder bag, so she would be gorgeous .Brad Pitt is wearing a beige coat, a white polo, a pair of gray jeans, and orange glasses, in my opinion he is a bit weird, this coat is weird and ugly and those glasses are ugly. He should wear a black coat, a pair of blue jeans, black glasses and this white polo. So he would be fantastic.
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Hi Pedro,
ResponderExcluirI'm really glad you have done your activities. Well, let's correct them.
1. "In this picture Angelina Jolie is pregnant for Brad Pitt" (In this picture Angelina Jolie is pregnant BY Brad Pitt)
2. "Yours childrens will be twin" (THEIR children will be twinS)
3. "To improve she could..." (To improve HER STYLE she could...)
4. "...bag. So she would gorgeous." (...bag, so she would BE gorgeous.)
5. "...glasses, im my opinion he is a bit weird..." (...glasses. IN my opinion he is a bit weird...)
6. "So he would fantastic." (So he would BE fantastic/AMAZING.)
WELL DONE Pedro! :)
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